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Were you there?
by bpbpersonals @ Thursday, Nov. 01, 2007 - 13:18:16

When I was in pain,
and wasn't able to sustain.
The thunder showered the rain-
and that made me go insane.

Were you there
for me
with me
or else
you forgot
you can't quite collect
who I am
what I am
what for I am
you do remember
you can quite collect
who/what for I am.

Were you there
when my blood spilled
in the basin
or else
you forgot
you can't quite collect
who I am
what I am
what for I am.

Were you there,
when I was being made a joke
you just listened
you laughed
you separated your jaws
you gave an insight
you desired more of the fun
or else
you forgot
you can't quite collect
who I am
what I am
what for I am
you do remember
who/what for I am.

Were you there?
Speak up!
Break your silence...

'07bpb

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02/11/07 @ 03:15

Namaste,

a very sad yet ensightful poem. your poems are very inspiring, how do you just think them up. truley brilliant.

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bpbpersonalsbpbpersonals [Member]
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02/11/07 @ 10:23

Namaste friend,
thank you for the sweet and inspiring comment. Poems rest in my heart and simultaneously flow in my blood-and I just pen them down. This nature and my devotion towards it have played a great role to nourish my senses.

Good reading and keep in touch.

'07bpb

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